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Dark prince loki vs. reader Chapter 1

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This story begins a few days before Thor coronation......

Your P.O.V.

“Do you still thinking you can defeat me?” I stand against Fandral with sword in my hand and smile on my face. He smiled; he thought that his smile could me melted down like ordinary girl in Asgard. But I´m not ordinary girl, I am me.
“Yes, of course_____” He replied me proudly.
“Show me what you know.” I told him. Fandral and other in Asgard don´t know that I can use a magic. This is my secret weapon, which taught me my prince. Our swords met in battle. Fadral loud laughed. This irritated me. I didn’t allowed him win this battle. I knew what I must do. I closed my eyes and I moved behind Fandral. He was surprised. He couldn´t find me. Now, I laughed loud.
“always cover you back.” I told him proudly. He turned to me. Then I hit my hand to his face. My hit knocked him to ground.
“you was cheating!” He angrily said me. I came closer him, put my edge of sword on his neck and mischievous smiled.
“No,” I started with innocent smiled, “I never cheating…I…I use everything what I know. You never beat me. Remember it.” my speaking finished proudly. I offered him my hand as a sign of peace. It accepted him.  He stood closed to me. He was looking to my eyes, his hand was in my hand, I felt his breath on my skin. It was very uncomfortable for me. He wanted me. I was for him aim, but my kisses will never belong to him. I saved for….I saved for my truly love….only for him… I never belong to the bigger womanizer in Asgard.
“Do you still enough?” Thor laughingly asked him, God of Thunder, arrogant prince of Asgard. Fandral turned to Thor and I finally left. I put my sword on table.
“He still thinks that can defeat me.” I said ironically.
“Once I beat you.” Fandral said with smile on his face. He was still imaging how kissing me. I saw on his eyes. Thor deeply laughed. Fandral stared at him blankly.  
“Why are you laughing?” He asked him. Now I must started laugh.
“How is possible that peaceful,” Thor looked at me, “and smiling lady can beat you?”
“Because I leave her always win.” Fandral said.
“Oh, you are truly gentlemen.” I said with irony in my voice. They turned on me. “Would you like next battle?” I asked him and I took my sword from table.
“for today enough!” Hogun angrily said. I hate him and he hates me. It is mutual. My smile disappeared when he came to training field.
“Why don’t teach you to fight your father? He is general.” He asked me. I angrily looked at him.
“He is not my father. I have not father. My father left my when I was little child.”  He knew how made me furry. I lost my temper with him. I put my sword on table. I looked at Thor.
“My prince.” Bowed with my head and walked away from the training field. I walked down a long corridor to castle. I must thought about my biological father. My mum said me that between her and my father was truly lover ended with my bird. I stopped when I heard strongly steps behind me. I looked behind me.
“He still can offend you?” Thor asked me with big smile. I breathed deeply and looked at him, I couldn’t answer him. I didn´t have words on his question. I simple crossed my hands on chest. Thor was still innocently smiling on me.
“I…..I…..I can´t stand him. I hate him. That is all.” I said him finally. I looked at Thor. Hi innocently smile used when something done. Something bad.  “What did you done?” I asked him.
“I? Done? Nothing.” Now looked at me like dummies.
“Thor?”
“OK, my lady,” He said me my lady, it not be good. I started afraid. “I would like ask something.” He came closely to me. The second person today broke my personal zone. Many maidens in Asgard now were happy, but I didn´t. I wandered around me with my eyes. Don´t look at him. My brain told me. I made two steps back.  
“Ask for what?”
“A few weeks is my coronation and I would like you, Lady _____,  invite on ball after coronation.” A big stone felt down after these words. He didn´t want kiss me or anything else. I smiled on him. I wanted to start speak when I got Lady Sif. She was staring at us. She was my best friend in Asgard. I knew all her feeling about Thor. I didn´t hurt her feeling and it is time to said it all Thor. I smiled at him again.
“Thank you for you offer, but someone else deserved your invitation than me. I am not right person for you, Thor. Lady Sif is the best person and I can´t go with you, cause I have already promised to someone.” I said mysteriously. He was very disappointed my answer.
“Fandral?” He asked me.
“Maybe.” I answered him, patted him gently on his shoulder, smiled at Sif. I left him alone and continued on my journey.

Loki P.O.V.

I watched from a distance how my stupid and arrogant brother asked her for her company. I could no look at it. I had no temper for it. I must calm down. I could not think on it. I turned away and came back to Royal gardens, here can come only Royal family and here relations. Here and library I can be, who truly I am. I sat under fresh flowery tree hidden in peaceful and beautiful place in garden. I opened book and started reading, when I before stopped. I tried reading but I can´t. I always close my eyes I saw her. She is still in my mind. How I can put away from my mind? How? I´m God of Mischief, I must find a way how do it. It is one way. Use a spell and I forgot on my pain. Is it a good way? Would I torture me? Can I? Without pain I don´t be who I am. Pain is my part. I closed my eyes and saw her again. Her smile. Her laugh. Her voice. I stared breathed deeply. I could not control my anger. If now came my brother to me I would pushed my hand to his face with big smile on my face. I stared smiling. It was a perfect imagine. I stared feel better. I closed my eyes. I heart her voice.
Ok guys this is my FIRST work in english, please forgive me my grammar....I promise this is only start, I will be continue......
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Centrino98's avatar
I did my best to surpress the grammer nazi inside me xD And I think you have potential if you just practise :) English isn't my mother language either :) I'm looking forward to see if your grammar has approved in the other chapters :)

Keep up the good work! :D :hug: